SIMILAR VIDEOS:
My favorite writing techniques: https://www.youtube.com/watch?vbBqT7KNLDsw
Show, don't tell: https://www.youtube.com/watch?vzM1lfA_Frgc
Specificity and concrete language: https://www.youtube.com/watch?vxgNW3EgtT1E
Creating complex characters: https://www.youtube.com/watch?vIdA8DjiQ6us&t146s
18 writing tips for more convincing prose: https://www.youtube.com/watch?vv45sfrLhLm4

All my published works: https://linktr.ee/shaelinbishop
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The Glimmer Train Bulletin Archive: https://www.glimmertrain.com/pages/bulletin_archives.php

MY SHORT STORY:
I'll never tell you this – The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/never-tell-you-this/
Tanning Bed – Minola Review: http://www.minolareview.com/shaelin-bishop
Barefoot – The Fiddlehead [print only]: https://thefiddlehead.ca/issue/282
Wishbone – PRISM international [print only]: http://prismmagazine.ca/2020/04/19/prism-58-3-sprawl-is-live/
Wishbone – Video Reading: https://vimeo.com/420052282
Cherry and Jane in the Garden of Eden – The Puritan: http://puritan-magazine.com/cherry-and-jane-in-the-garden-of-eden/
Hold me under till I see the light – The New Quarterly: https://tnq.ca/story/hold-me-under-till-i-see-the-light/
Beautiful animal room: https://roommagazine.com/issues/twine
Zugzwang – CBC [excerpt]: https://www.cbc.ca/books/literaryprizes/zugzwang-by-shaelin-bishop-1.5977031

TIME STAMP:
0:00 – Introduction
0:50 – Skip scenes that the reader can imagine
2:11 – Use strong verbs
3:33 – Avoid verbs with “-ing” and “to be”
4:40 – Describe, don't explain
5:31 – If your story is boring, slow down
6:46 – Be specific
7:45 – The ups and downs of hope and despair
8:23 – Longing of character
9:06 – Character contradictions
10:08 – Use as few words as possible
11:17 – Artistic Incongruence
12:15 – How could this be more interesting?

MORE WRITING TIPS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?listPL8-jsG6NG3oJsJ6LTZRtYtCHWi-5pjhQJ
WRITING VLOGS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?listPL8-jsG6NG3oK35m9jtz_aR2t8Dssl6eqJ
WRITING CHATS & DISCUSSIONS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?listPL8-jsG6NG3oLHy-zpu_yk7CfbJvrNc1O7
BOOK REVIEWS: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?listPL8-jsG6NG3oKlrHVFgs9UZCxJjB0Azqco

Check out more videos of me on writing and publishing via @Reedsy!: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpo0MkTAyEl73PmIVs8CQvQ

OUTRO MUSIC: /"luvtea [acoustic]/" by Autumn Keys

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