10 common mistakes new writers make (and how to fix them)

10 common mistakes new writers make (and how to fix them)

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As a developmental editor and writer, I've noticed patterns in the types of problems new writers often face. This video covers ten of the most common stumbling blocks, focusing primarily on big-picture issues and attitudes toward the publishing industry. In future videos, I'll cover common grammar and dialogue errors. We all have to start somewhere, and by making mistakes, we can improve our storytelling as novelists.

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Opening animation by Vitor A. Dupont: https://www.behance.net/vitordupont

Title and end credits music: “Clockwork” by Vindsvept – https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Zl4EGLoiI8&t=83s

Background music by Vindsvept:
+ “Guardian of the Forest”
+ “Skymning”
+ “Chasing Shadows”
+ “Enlighten”
+ “The Fairy”
+ “Woodland Lullaby”
+ “Wildkin Glade”
+ “Journey to Nowhere”
+ “Into the unknown”

SOURCES
“What is an adverb?” by Grammarly: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/adverb/

"Seriously, what's so bad about adverbs?" by Charlie Jane Anders: https://io9.gizmodo.com/seriously-whats-so-bad-about-adverbs-5437610#:~:text=Really%2C%20adverbs%20aren%27t%20bad%20in%20themselves.&text=Basically%2C%20an%20adverb%20modifies%20a,to%20clutter%20your%20sentence%20pointlessly

“4 Ways Adverbs Weaken Writing” by Britainy Sorenson: https://www.bkacontent.com/adverbs-weaken-writing/

“Learn to identify and write high-concept stories” by MasterClass: https://www.masterclass.com/articles/learn-to-identify-and-write-high-concept-stories

“The Word Count of 175 Favorite Novels” by Broke by Books (Sarah S. Davis): https://brokebybooks.com/the-word-count-of-175-favorite-novels/

“How long should a novel be?” by Louise Harnby: https://www.louiseharnbyproofreader.com/blog/how-long-should-a-novel-be-guidance-for-fiction-authors

“41 Places to Find a Critique Partner” by Cathy Yardley on The Write Life: https://thewritelife.com/find-a-critique-partner/

“15 Places to Find Your Next Beta Reader” by KM Weiland: https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/find-your-next-beta-reader/

“How much does it cost to self publish a book in 2021?” by Reedsy: https://blog.reedsy.com/cost-to-self-publish-a-book/

“My Top 12 Writing Tips! | Advice That Changed the Way I Write” by ShaelinWrites: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LxiYwMrwRg&t=413s

“Key Paths to Book Publishing” by Jane Friedman: https://www.janefriedman.com/key-book-publishing-path/#:~:text=My%20chart%20divides%20the%20field,-publishing%2C%20and%20social%20publishing

THE BUSINESS OF BEING A WRITER by Jane Friedman: https://www.amazon.com/Business-Chicago-Writing-Editing-Publishing/dp/022639316X/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&linkCode=sl1&tag=janefrie-20&linkId=c01b14ad6ea4a53d3f8a5665433170a3&language=en_US

Neil Gaiman – Inspirational graduation speech at the University of the Arts 2012: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ikAb-NYkseI

Introduction (0:00)
1. Treat writing advice as if it were set in stone. (0:46)
2. Inability to convey a coherent story concept. (2:46)
3. Write a novel like a bad movie. (4:17)
4. Creating inconsistent or undefined characters. (6:25)
5. It fails to convey the emotions of the story to the reader. (9:23)
6. Head-hopping, or not understanding the difference between a third-person omniscient view and a third-person limited view. (11:43)
7. Unintentional repetition of plot points or sentences. (14:51)
8. Not knowing much about the genre or target audience of the book. (18:27)
9. Impatience and underestimation of the amount of work needed to revise a novel ready for publication. (22:29)
10. Unrealistic expectations about how publishing works. (25:14)
Final Thoughts (28:21)

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